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Complete the Story Contest
Anitha and Ram are newly married couple settled in US;
One day in their daily life, this has happened!!!
(This story is purely my imagination only, so do not search Google for any help)

The Best Completed Story will be selected by RAVI Sir

The Story should be complete in dialogue Form only


Now to the Story

RAM, Anitha and Gene


one day Ram returning from office very late with a big packet in his hand

Anitha: What is that big gift packet?

Ram: oh. I forgot to tell you, you know Sumi, my class mate, I met her...


Anitha: so... why this gift packet...


Ram: she has invited us for her birthday party tomorrow…


Anitha: so what. You did not ask me whether I am free tomorrow...


Ram: I thought that you will be interested to see her...


Anitha: I... interested to see her… she was after you in those college days... you told me... once...


Ram: forget about it... see this gift... the shop Walla gave it... (Ram takes out another small packet)


Anitha: leave that small gift... why that big gift for that Sumi? You never got that big for anyone...


Ram: she only wanted it… (Thinking he has done a mistake)


Anitha: oh... very good, she also came with you to gift shop?


Ram: mmm her car broke down... so I had to drop her.


Anitha: Oh... you also took her to her house... that’s why you are late...


Ram: ammam… I am hungry... let us have dinner now...


Anitha: I am keeping that big gift... you give that small gift to that Sumi…


Ram: wait wait... do not open it… you first see that small packet... it is some
Antique item... given by that shopper as I am the lucky 50Th customer entering his shop today...


Anitha: leave that... how much you paid for that big gift?


Ram: not much... only 50$

Anitha: 50$ not much!!! You return it and get another for 10 $ tomorrow itself...

Ram: ok... but in that case I have to return this small gift to shop walla...


Anitha: why... that is for 50 Th customer only... you told you were the 50 Th customer, nothing to do with how much worth you buy...


Ram: yea... you are right... we will keep it...

Anitha: let me see what is that 50 Th customer gift...


Ram: be careful Anitha... it is a small glass item... shop walla told me.


Anitha: (opening the gift) it is small old bottle. I don’t want it... you keep it...


(She tosses up to Ram, it falls down its cork comes out... and then A Gene comes out…)

Gene: HA HA HA HA… I Am FREE I AM FREE I AM FREE>>>


Gene: Ha Ha Ha.. I am Free I am Free ..

Ram: Ayyo.. i am scared... Anitha pl save me...

Anitha: mmmmm now you want me to save you... why did you go with Sumi to buy that gift?

Ram : Anitha..that is not important now... This Gene looks like my Ex Boss...i am really scared..

Anitha: only because you went to buy a gift for Sumi.. you got this... dont know what you will do.. drive out this Gene from my home.. right now...

Ram : Shall we beg to that Gene to go away... ..

Anitha: why... are you not a man!!! I do not want to see this one here right in my home..

Ram: sari... Sari.. sari..( calling Gene ) Gene..Sir Gene Sir pl go out of my house now.. Anitha does not want you here...

Anitha: why my name.. Do you like it? drive that out of now!!!!

Ram: it is looking at me... i am really scared Anitha... if we can share our dinner with it, it may go...

Anitha: i have not any thing extra.. anyway.. not for this creature..


Gene: Ha ha ha... i am hungry...not eaten for so many years..

Ram; pavam Anitha.. let us give some thing..

Anitha: last week panna More Kuzambu is there … shall I give it !!!

Ram : yeaaaaa!!!! Good Idea.. sometime.. you also talk sense… let us try that.. it may run away..

Anitha: Hey.. Gene.. we will give you some More Kuzambu with little rice.. after taking it.. you must vanish.. okey?

Gene: Ayyo… More Kuzamba!!! No chance .. since I took your More Kuzambu in your last birth.. I was hiding in the bottle.. someone.. closed the bottle with a cork… even since I was there.. now I am free… pl no more more Kuzambu …

Anitha: Romba Kozuppu than… Ram.. I cant give any thing else …


Ram: Pavan Anitha… yesterday I made vetha kozambu.. give that with some rice..

Gene: yeaaaaaaa.. I lke Vetha Kozambu…

Anitha: then again tomorrow you have to cook..

Ram: sari.. sari.. atleast once in a week you cook please..

Anitha: Parkalam!!!! Hey Gene.. what is your name… take this and run… okey ?

Gene: Seekram.. Pl I am hungry...

(Phone bell ringing)

Anitha: Wait a minute, (Anitha picking up the phone)


Other side: hi... I am Sumi...is this Mrs.Ram?


Anitha: (her face turning very stern) mmm yeaa


Sumi: Hey... I just want to thank Ram for his lovely gift he got for me ... I suppose you are also coming to the party tomoo...

Anitha: .. Not sure...


Sumi: Oh... than….ok... Ram wanted to meet my younger sister … she will be here for the party tomorrow...


Anitha: oh... he may not come also tomorrow... we are some what tied up…


Sumi: oh... that should be very bad... is he around…?

Anitha: he has just been out...


Sumi: oh... ok… his cell phone is with me... he left it in my home when he dropped me...


Anitha: (face red)… He needs his cell phone… ok … I will myself collect it from you tomo... morning some time... it is too late now… bye…


Sumi: wait... one thing... Pl ask Ram to come and collect the cell phone...

Anitha: why... he may not find time...


Sumi: yeaa... I know... you are not having any job now… so you can...

Anitha: (her face red) … no I am not coming… I will ask Ram to come and pick up the cell...

Sumi: that’s very nice...

Anitha: slamming the phone down… and looking at Ram angrily...

Ram trembling... Gene ... is laughing


NOW COMPLETE THE STORY USING YOUR IMAGINATION!!!
 
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P.J. said:
Complete the Story Contest
Anitha and Ram are newly married couple settled in US;
One day in their daily life, this has happened!!!
(This story is purely my imagination only, so do not search Google for any help)

The Best Completed Story will be selected by RAVI Sir

The Story should be complete in dialogue Form only


Now to the Story

RAM, Anitha and Gene


one day Ram returning from office very late with a big packet in his hand

Anitha: What is that big gift packet?

Ram: oh. I forgot to tell you, you know Sumi, my class mate, I met her...


Anitha: so... why this gift packet...


Ram: she has invited us for her birthday party tomorrow…


Anitha: so what. You did not ask me whether I am free tomorrow...


Ram: I thought that you will be interested to see her...


Anitha: I... interested to see her… she was after you in those college days... you told me... once...


Ram: forget about it... see this gift... the shop Walla gave it... (Ram takes out another small packet)


Anitha: leave that small gift... why that big gift for that Sumi? You never got that big for anyone...


Ram: she only wanted it… (Thinking he has done a mistake)


Anitha: oh... very good, she also came with you to gift shop?


Ram: mmm her car broke down... so I had to drop her.


Anitha: Oh... you also took her to her house... that’s why you are late...


Ram: ammam… I am hungry... let us have dinner now...


Anitha: I am keeping that big gift... you give that small gift to that Sumi…


Ram: wait wait... do not open it… you first see that small packet... it is some
Antique item... given by that shopper as I am the lucky 50Th customer entering his shop today...


Anitha: leave that... how much you paid for that big gift?


Ram: not much... only 50$

Anitha: 50$ not much!!! You return it and get another for 10 $ tomorrow itself...

Ram: ok... but in that case I have to return this small gift to shop walla...


Anitha: why... that is for 50 Th customer only... you told you were the 50 Th customer, nothing to do with how much worth you buy...


Ram: yea... you are right... we will keep it...

Anitha: let me see what is that 50 Th customer gift...


Ram: be careful Anitha... it is a small glass item... shop walla told me.


Anitha: (opening the gift) it is small old bottle. I don’t want it... you keep it...


(She tosses up to Ram, it falls down its cork comes out... and then A Gene comes out…)

Gene: HA HA HA HA… I Am FREE I AM FREE I AM FREE>>>


Gene: Ha Ha Ha.. I am Free I am Free ..

Ram: Ayyo.. i am scared... Anitha pl save me...

Anitha: mmmmm now you want me to save you... why did you go with Sumi to buy that gift?

Ram : Anitha..that is not important now... This Gene looks like my Ex Boss...i am really scared..

Anitha: only because you went to buy a gift for Sumi.. you got this... dont know what you will do.. drive out this Gene from my home.. right now...

Ram : Shall we beg to that Gene to go away... ..

Anitha: why... are you not a man!!! I do not want to see this one here right in my home..

Ram: sari... Sari.. sari..( calling Gene ) Gene..Sir Gene Sir pl go out of my house now.. Anitha does not want you here...

Anitha: why my name.. Do you like it? drive that out of now!!!!

Ram: it is looking at me... i am really scared Anitha... if we can share our dinner with it, it may go...

Anitha: i have not any thing extra.. anyway.. not for this creature..


Gene: Ha ha ha... i am hungry...not eaten for so many years..

Ram; pavam Anitha.. let us give some thing..

Anitha: last week panna More Kuzambu is there … shall I give it !!!

Ram : yeaaaaa!!!! Good Idea.. sometime.. you also talk sense… let us try that.. it may run away..

Anitha: Hey.. Gene.. we will give you some More Kuzambu with little rice.. after taking it.. you must vanish.. okey?

Gene: Ayyo… More Kuzamba!!! No chance .. since I took your More Kuzambu in your last birth.. I was hiding in the bottle.. someone.. closed the bottle with a cork… even since I was there.. now I am free… pl no more more Kuzambu …

Anitha: Romba Kozuppu than… Ram.. I cant give any thing else …


Ram: Pavan Anitha… yesterday I made vetha kozambu.. give that with some rice..

Gene: yeaaaaaaa.. I lke Vetha Kozambu…

Anitha: then again tomorrow you have to cook..

Ram: sari.. sari.. atleast once in a week you cook please..

Anitha: Parkalam!!!! Hey Gene.. what is your name… take this and run… okey ?

Gene: Seekram.. Pl I am hungry...

(Phone bell ringing)

Anitha: Wait a minute, (Anitha picking up the phone)


Other side: hi... I am Sumi...is this Mrs.Ram?


Anitha: (her face turning very stern) mmm yeaa


Sumi: Hey... I just want to thank Ram for his lovely gift he got for me ... I suppose you are also coming to the party tomoo...

Anitha: .. Not sure...


Sumi: Oh... than….ok... Ram wanted to meet my younger sister … she will be here for the party tomorrow...


Anitha: oh... he may not come also tomorrow... we are some what tied up…


Sumi: oh... that should be very bad... is he around…?

Anitha: he has just been out...


Sumi: oh... ok… his cell phone is with me... he left it in my home when he dropped me...


Anitha: (face red)… He needs his cell phone… ok … I will myself collect it from you tomo... morning some time... it is too late now… bye…


Sumi: wait... one thing... Pl ask Ram to come and collect the cell phone...

Anitha: why... he may not find time...


Sumi: yeaa... I know... you are not having any job now… so you can...

Anitha: (her face red) … no I am not coming… I will ask Ram to come and pick up the cell...

Sumi: that’s very nice...

Anitha: slamming the phone down… and looking at Ram angrily...

Ram trembling... Gene ... is laughing


NOW COMPLETE THE STORY USING YOUR IMAGINATION!!!
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"NOW COMPLETE THE STORY USING YOUR IMAGINATION!!!"....


My goodness... It will be beyond my capability...!! By the way what is the title of this story...? 'Gene'tic

intolerance..??!!


TVK​



 
Shri PJ


A humble suggestion -

This contest would be time taking, testing one's patience.


Kindly come up with some other contest like that of giving caption to a picture. That would attract replies and would be easy to judge and declare the winner as well.
 
C RAVI said:
Shri PJ


A humble suggestion -

This contest would be time taking, testing one's patience.


Kindly come up with some other contest like that of giving caption to a picture. That would attract replies and would be easy to judge and declare the winner as well.
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You are right, RAVI SIR

Ok, i will come up with another alternate keeping this also.

Anyone can choose either of them

That way, we may get more entries.

Thanks
 
P.J. said:
Complete the Story Contest
Anitha and Ram are newly married couple settled in US;
One day in their daily life, this has happened!!!
(This story is purely my imagination only, so do not search Google for any help)

The Best Completed Story will be selected by RAVI Sir

The Story should be complete in dialogue Form only


Now to the Story

RAM, Anitha and Gene


one day Ram returning from office very late with a big packet in his hand

Anitha: What is that big gift packet?

Ram: oh. I forgot to tell you, you know Sumi, my class mate, I met her...


Anitha: so... why this gift packet...


Ram: she has invited us for her birthday party tomorrow…


Anitha: so what. You did not ask me whether I am free tomorrow...


Ram: I thought that you will be interested to see her...


Anitha: I... interested to see her… she was after you in those college days... you told me... once...


Ram: forget about it... see this gift... the shop Walla gave it... (Ram takes out another small packet)


Anitha: leave that small gift... why that big gift for that Sumi? You never got that big for anyone...


Ram: she only wanted it… (Thinking he has done a mistake)


Anitha: oh... very good, she also came with you to gift shop?


Ram: mmm her car broke down... so I had to drop her.


Anitha: Oh... you also took her to her house... that’s why you are late...


Ram: ammam… I am hungry... let us have dinner now...


Anitha: I am keeping that big gift... you give that small gift to that Sumi…


Ram: wait wait... do not open it… you first see that small packet... it is some
Antique item... given by that shopper as I am the lucky 50Th customer entering his shop today...


Anitha: leave that... how much you paid for that big gift?


Ram: not much... only 50$

Anitha: 50$ not much!!! You return it and get another for 10 $ tomorrow itself...

Ram: ok... but in that case I have to return this small gift to shop walla...


Anitha: why... that is for 50 Th customer only... you told you were the 50 Th customer, nothing to do with how much worth you buy...


Ram: yea... you are right... we will keep it...

Anitha: let me see what is that 50 Th customer gift...


Ram: be careful Anitha... it is a small glass item... shop walla told me.


Anitha: (opening the gift) it is small old bottle. I don’t want it... you keep it...


(She tosses up to Ram, it falls down its cork comes out... and then A Gene comes out…)

Gene: HA HA HA HA… I Am FREE I AM FREE I AM FREE>>>


Gene: Ha Ha Ha.. I am Free I am Free ..

Ram: Ayyo.. i am scared... Anitha pl save me...

Anitha: mmmmm now you want me to save you... why did you go with Sumi to buy that gift?

Ram : Anitha..that is not important now... This Gene looks like my Ex Boss...i am really scared..

Anitha: only because you went to buy a gift for Sumi.. you got this... dont know what you will do.. drive out this Gene from my home.. right now...

Ram : Shall we beg to that Gene to go away... ..

Anitha: why... are you not a man!!! I do not want to see this one here right in my home..

Ram: sari... Sari.. sari..( calling Gene ) Gene..Sir Gene Sir pl go out of my house now.. Anitha does not want you here...

Anitha: why my name.. Do you like it? drive that out of now!!!!

Ram: it is looking at me... i am really scared Anitha... if we can share our dinner with it, it may go...

Anitha: i have not any thing extra.. anyway.. not for this creature..


Gene: Ha ha ha... i am hungry...not eaten for so many years..

Ram; pavam Anitha.. let us give some thing..

Anitha: last week panna More Kuzambu is there … shall I give it !!!

Ram : yeaaaaa!!!! Good Idea.. sometime.. you also talk sense… let us try that.. it may run away..

Anitha: Hey.. Gene.. we will give you some More Kuzambu with little rice.. after taking it.. you must vanish.. okey?

Gene: Ayyo… More Kuzamba!!! No chance .. since I took your More Kuzambu in your last birth.. I was hiding in the bottle.. someone.. closed the bottle with a cork… even since I was there.. now I am free… pl no more more Kuzambu …

Anitha: Romba Kozuppu than… Ram.. I cant give any thing else …


Ram: Pavan Anitha… yesterday I made vetha kozambu.. give that with some rice..

Gene: yeaaaaaaa.. I lke Vetha Kozambu…

Anitha: then again tomorrow you have to cook..

Ram: sari.. sari.. atleast once in a week you cook please..

Anitha: Parkalam!!!! Hey Gene.. what is your name… take this and run… okey ?

Gene: Seekram.. Pl I am hungry...

(Phone bell ringing)

Anitha: Wait a minute, (Anitha picking up the phone)


Other side: hi... I am Sumi...is this Mrs.Ram?


Anitha: (her face turning very stern) mmm yeaa


Sumi: Hey... I just want to thank Ram for his lovely gift he got for me ... I suppose you are also coming to the party tomoo...

Anitha: .. Not sure...


Sumi: Oh... than….ok... Ram wanted to meet my younger sister … she will be here for the party tomorrow...


Anitha: oh... he may not come also tomorrow... we are some what tied up…


Sumi: oh... that should be very bad... is he around…?

Anitha: he has just been out...


Sumi: oh... ok… his cell phone is with me... he left it in my home when he dropped me...


Anitha: (face red)… He needs his cell phone… ok … I will myself collect it from you tomo... morning some time... it is too late now… bye…


Sumi: wait... one thing... Pl ask Ram to come and collect the cell phone...

Anitha: why... he may not find time...


Sumi: yeaa... I know... you are not having any job now… so you can...

Anitha: (her face red) … no I am not coming… I will ask Ram to come and pick up the cell...

Sumi: that’s very nice...

Anitha: slamming the phone down… and looking at Ram angrily...

Ram trembling... Gene ... is laughing


NOW COMPLETE THE STORY USING YOUR IMAGINATION!!!
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Dear PJ sir,

Firstly that Anitha female is such a rude person and trying to act cocky with her husband.

So you see whole story can be ended right away with just dialogue between Genie and Ram.


Ram :Genie are you Muslim genie?

Genie: What is this? Why does a genie have to be only a muslim

Ram:No No I thought of Alladin and the wonderful lamp story.

Genie: I am Indian Hindu pure veg genie.

Ram:Oh Good..so you wont have problems staying with us..we are also pure veg.

Genie: I am hungry..get me some Thayir Sadam.

Ram: Aiyoo...so sweet Genie..I have Thayir Sadam..my amma made today for me.

Genie: Why your amma still cooking?? Doesn't your wife cook?

Ram: Ssshhh..don't let her hear you..she will kill you!

Genie: Me!! Death?? No way man..Chandrasekharamashraye Mama Kim Karishyati Vai Yamaha.

Ram:What?? Chandrashekara Asthakam? So you are a Shaivite?

Genie: Why is there a problem? Shiva is Lord of the Bhootas too.

Ram:OMG! I am a Vaishnavite....I did not expect you to be a Shaivite!

Genie: So now..do you want me to grant wishes or not??

Ram: Yes Yes..that is a different matter all together.

Genie : (thinks in his mind)..what am I even doing here?

Ram: Ok..how many wishes can you grant me?

Genie: 3 wishes.

Ram: Wow! Let me see...ok here goes

1st wish :make me rich

Genie: Done!

The whole house transforms into a big beautiful mansion..totally out of this world and its on a private Island!

Ram:Wow Genie..this is awesome.

2nd wish: Make me handsome!

Genie: Done!

Genie transforms Ram into a Tom Cruise clone.

Ram: Wow Genie this is just great..I can get any girl now.

Genie: So your 3rd and final wish..be very careful..no mistakes please.

Ram: Genie get me the Padukone Hottie!

Genie: Done!

Prakash Padukone in his prime youth appears right in front of Ram.

Ram: What is this??

I asked for the Padukone Hottie and you give me her dad??

Genie:You asked for the Padukone Hottie..so you got what you wanted!
Oh forgot to tell you..I am gay!
 
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renukaji

Excellent

Please continue the story to tell

1.Did Ram or Anitha went to attend the B'day party and got back Ram's cell?

2.How did Ram released Gene?

Any other..

Your imagination is very good.

This Gene being a gay is a surprise element.. Pavam Gene..

Now I have to request RAVI Sir to continue his Judge role .. it is very easy for him now as only one entry has come.
 
Dear PJ sir,

Ok I will continue my story:

Ram:Genieeeeeeeeeeee! What the hell am I going to do with Prakash Padukone??

Genie: Well..you can play badminton and I can watch..I used to admire his game especially when he bends down to pick up the shuttle cock.

Ram:Hey Genie! I am not gay like you! It is not fair that you dragged in Prakash Padukone here!

Genie: Ok OK..I will send Prakash Ji home now on Chennai Express.

Suddenly a train appears and Prakash Padukone is whisked away into the train and dissappears.

Ram:You stupid Genie..You gay and you dare sing Chandrasekhara Ashtakam!

Genie: Hey what do you mean?? Gays can't pray or what??

Ram: You are Gay..why do you need to pray?

Genie:Hey if you can pray why can't I pray?

Ram: I am not gay ok! I am straight!You are Kama driven.

Genie: Oh..looks whose talking...the Manmatha Rasa of the college...was romancing around with Sumi in college.

Anitha over hears it....

Anitha: What?? Manmatha Rasa..Sumi ??What is this??

Ram:Genie..shut up! shut up! As it is I am in enough problems becos of Sumi's B'day and the fact that my cell phone is in her house.
But at least I am straight and not gay like you.

Genie: Hey stop this gay bashing ok..whatever it is you too have Kama.

Anitha: Can anyone tell me what is going on here?

Ram: Anitha..you wait ok..this Genie is getting out of hand.

Ram:Genie..yes I have Kama..but it is Sattva Kama unlike your Rajas Kama!

Genie: Well..well..since when Kama has Sattva,Rajas and Tamas ! This is news to me.

Ram: Where have you been all this years??

Genie: In a bottle.

Ram:What else could I expect..dumb Genie in a dumb bottle.

Genie: Hey my bottle comes with Wifi Ok..so don't think I never kept up with times.I even know how many times you have visited Sunny Leone's website.

Anitha: Sunny Leone?? Who is that? I only know Sunny Deol!

Genie: Anitha we are not talking about the Deol Jaat here we are talking about the Jhatka Leone gives.

Ram: Ok Ok Genie..stop it..what you want from me now?

Genie: We have to make a deal here ok..since you freed me..I have to stay with you for the rest of my life unless...

Ram:Unless what??

Genie looks at the sky and suddenly Cheran's autograph movie song Nyabagam Varudhe ..Nyabagam Varudhe songs starts playing and Genie becomes all filled with emotions.

Ram:Genie..what happened??

Genie: Oh...I am having flash backs of my previous life.

Ram:Previous life??

Genie: Mine is a sad story...you will never understand.

Ram: No Genie tell me what happened.

Genie: I used to be a human before...I was handsome King named Suryaveera who ruled my land justly.
One day I was having a swim in the river with my wife Chandramukhi.
Suddenly she disappeared under the water and I was frantically looking for her.

I then saw a leg in the water and I pulled it thinking it is her leg.

But to my surprise it was not her but it was the leg of a sage who was doing the morning oblation.

He cursed me to become a crocodile..then...

Ram:Hey..this sounds like how the Gandharva Huhu was cursed to become a crocodile in Gajendra Moksha episode.

Genie: Don't you know we Indians always recycle and repack the same story for generations..let me finish.

Then I became a crocodile and this time I accidentally pulled the saree of a sages wife who had come to take water from the river I was still looking for my Chandramukhi..I thought it was her.

The enraged sage cursed me that I will become a gay genie and he put me in a bottle and threw me into the sea...but he told me that the day I meet Chandramukhi the curse will be lifted..till then I will have to remain a gay genie.I don't even know where my Chandramukhi is.

To be continued....
 
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"I don't even know where my Chandramukhi is..."

poor gene.. He/She/whatever it may be should ask RAJINI..where Chandramugi is..!!


TVK
 
P.J. said:
Now I have to request RAVI Sir to continue his Judge role .. it is very easy for him now as only one entry has come.
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Shri PJ,

Judgement to declare the winner takes place only when there is a contest. There would not be any role of a judge when there is no competition among multiple participants.

As well, already I have done with my judging role in another thread, couple of days before. As such, I am no more a judge.


The winner in that thread (AUH) should be the judge now!
 
renukaji

your imagination is superoooo super..

in the first episode Gene was telling because it took morekozambu in his lat birth

(Gene: Ayyo… More Kuzamba!!! No chance .. since I took your More Kuzambu in your last birth.. I was hiding in the bottle.. someone.. closed the bottle with a cork… even since I was there.. now I am free… pl no more more Kuzambu )

So you have to connect to this line..Gene already met Anitha in her last birth!!

This Chandramuki set up is another Twist!!!

I wish more members read this!!

Ram is also having an EYE on Sumi's sister...( like all men)

Was she Chandramuki in her last birth!!!( sumi's sister)

As RAVI Sir says he can not be a judge again, I would request Auh ji to be the Judge for this!!!

It is one horse race so far... who knows..


 
P.J. said:
renukaji

your imagination is superoooo super..

in the first episode Gene was telling because it took morekozambu in his lat birth

(Gene: Ayyo… More Kuzamba!!! No chance .. since I took your More Kuzambu in your last birth.. I was hiding in the bottle.. someone.. closed the bottle with a cork… even since I was there.. now I am free… pl no more more Kuzambu )

So you have to connect to this line..Gene already met Anitha in her last birth!!

This Chandramuki set up is another Twist!!!

I wish more members read this!!

Ram is also having an EYE on Sumi's sister...( like all men)

Was she Chandramuki in her last birth!!!( sumi's sister)

As RAVI Sir says he can not be a judge again, I would request Auh ji to be the Judge for this!!!

It is one horse race so far... who knows..


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Dear PJ sir,

Yes I have all that in my mind..I will come to that if I get the time tomorrow cos I have a Exam this Sunday.

Yes I will surely connect Anitha and the More Kuzambhu..I already have that in my mind too and Chandramukhi too.

I have planned to plot in my mind..will be more active Monday onwards.
 
renukaji

I am sure that you will do very well in your Exam on Sunday, my prayers are for you.

you are doing extremely well in this story line, carry on, i wish Raji madam adds some comments to this thread.

Let us plan to do more such stories together( if you agree)
 
P.J. said:
Complete the Story Contest
Anitha and Ram are newly married couple settled in US;
One day in their daily life, this has happened!!!
(This story is purely my imagination only, so do not search Google for any help)

The Best Completed Story will be selected by RAVI Sir

The Story should be complete in dialogue Form only


Now to the Story

RAM, Anitha and Gene


one day Ram returning from office very late with a big packet in his hand

Anitha: What is that big gift packet?

Ram: oh. I forgot to tell you, you know Sumi, my class mate, I met her...


Anitha: so... why this gift packet...


Ram: she has invited us for her birthday party tomorrow…


Anitha: so what. You did not ask me whether I am free tomorrow...


Ram: I thought that you will be interested to see her...


Anitha: I... interested to see her… she was after you in those college days... you told me... once...


Ram: forget about it... see this gift... the shop Walla gave it... (Ram takes out another small packet)


Anitha: leave that small gift... why that big gift for that Sumi? You never got that big for anyone...


Ram: she only wanted it… (Thinking he has done a mistake)


Anitha: oh... very good, she also came with you to gift shop?


Ram: mmm her car broke down... so I had to drop her.


Anitha: Oh... you also took her to her house... that’s why you are late...


Ram: ammam… I am hungry... let us have dinner now...


Anitha: I am keeping that big gift... you give that small gift to that Sumi…


Ram: wait wait... do not open it… you first see that small packet... it is some
Antique item... given by that shopper as I am the lucky 50Th customer entering his shop today...


Anitha: leave that... how much you paid for that big gift?


Ram: not much... only 50$

Anitha: 50$ not much!!! You return it and get another for 10 $ tomorrow itself...

Ram: ok... but in that case I have to return this small gift to shop walla...


Anitha: why... that is for 50 Th customer only... you told you were the 50 Th customer, nothing to do with how much worth you buy...


Ram: yea... you are right... we will keep it...

Anitha: let me see what is that 50 Th customer gift...


Ram: be careful Anitha... it is a small glass item... shop walla told me.


Anitha: (opening the gift) it is small old bottle. I don’t want it... you keep it...


(She tosses up to Ram, it falls down its cork comes out... and then A Gene comes out…)

Gene: HA HA HA HA… I Am FREE I AM FREE I AM FREE>>>


Gene: Ha Ha Ha.. I am Free I am Free ..

Ram: Ayyo.. i am scared... Anitha pl save me...

Anitha: mmmmm now you want me to save you... why did you go with Sumi to buy that gift?

Ram : Anitha..that is not important now... This Gene looks like my Ex Boss...i am really scared..

Anitha: only because you went to buy a gift for Sumi.. you got this... dont know what you will do.. drive out this Gene from my home.. right now...

Ram : Shall we beg to that Gene to go away... ..

Anitha: why... are you not a man!!! I do not want to see this one here right in my home..

Ram: sari... Sari.. sari..( calling Gene ) Gene..Sir Gene Sir pl go out of my house now.. Anitha does not want you here...

Anitha: why my name.. Do you like it? drive that out of now!!!!

Ram: it is looking at me... i am really scared Anitha... if we can share our dinner with it, it may go...

Anitha: i have not any thing extra.. anyway.. not for this creature..


Gene: Ha ha ha... i am hungry...not eaten for so many years..

Ram; pavam Anitha.. let us give some thing..

Anitha: last week panna More Kuzambu is there … shall I give it !!!

Ram : yeaaaaa!!!! Good Idea.. sometime.. you also talk sense… let us try that.. it may run away..

Anitha: Hey.. Gene.. we will give you some More Kuzambu with little rice.. after taking it.. you must vanish.. okey?

Gene: Ayyo… More Kuzamba!!! No chance .. since I took your More Kuzambu in your last birth.. I was hiding in the bottle.. someone.. closed the bottle with a cork… even since I was there.. now I am free… pl no more more Kuzambu …

Anitha: Romba Kozuppu than… Ram.. I cant give any thing else …


Ram: Pavan Anitha… yesterday I made vetha kozambu.. give that with some rice..

Gene: yeaaaaaaa.. I lke Vetha Kozambu…

Anitha: then again tomorrow you have to cook..

Ram: sari.. sari.. atleast once in a week you cook please..

Anitha: Parkalam!!!! Hey Gene.. what is your name… take this and run… okey ?

Gene: Seekram.. Pl I am hungry...

(Phone bell ringing)

Anitha: Wait a minute, (Anitha picking up the phone)


Other side: hi... I am Sumi...is this Mrs.Ram?


Anitha: (her face turning very stern) mmm yeaa


Sumi: Hey... I just want to thank Ram for his lovely gift he got for me ... I suppose you are also coming to the party tomoo...

Anitha: .. Not sure...


Sumi: Oh... than….ok... Ram wanted to meet my younger sister … she will be here for the party tomorrow...


Anitha: oh... he may not come also tomorrow... we are some what tied up…


Sumi: oh... that should be very bad... is he around…?

Anitha: he has just been out...


Sumi: oh... ok… his cell phone is with me... he left it in my home when he dropped me...


Anitha: (face red)… He needs his cell phone… ok … I will myself collect it from you tomo... morning some time... it is too late now… bye…


Sumi: wait... one thing... Pl ask Ram to come and collect the cell phone...

Anitha: why... he may not find time...


Sumi: yeaa... I know... you are not having any job now… so you can...

Anitha: (her face red) … no I am not coming… I will ask Ram to come and pick up the cell...

Sumi: that’s very nice...

Anitha: slamming the phone down… and looking at Ram angrily...

Ram trembling... Gene ... is laughing


NOW COMPLETE THE STORY USING YOUR IMAGINATION!!!
Click to expand...

Sir,

Here is the continuation.

NOW COMPLETE THE STORY USING YOUR IMAGINATION!!!

Gene: I am hungry serve the Vetha Kozhambu

Ram: Here, have a nice dinner.

Gene: This does’t taste like Vetha Kozhambu

Ram: See, this is what available. You have no choice now.

Anitha: Ram how can you be that much irresponsible by leaving your Mobile in her place?

Ram: We are so much involved on the subject ‘Living together’ and I forget.

Anitha: Oh!! Living together? Really…. Very serious subject for you both. Studied together and now ..discussing about ‘living
together’, .. I think the next subject will be getting children without marrying….

Ram: I will go to her place tomorrow.

Anitha: What for?

Ram: To collect my mobile yah

Anitha: Send that creature eating there… to collect it.

Ram: No… No… It may not know her place.

Gene: I know… I know her place and I even know her sister, an Advocate and also an expert in divorce cases, presently staying with Sumi.

Anitha: Oh .. Her sister, an Advocate, specialized in divorce cases. Now I can understand why you are very keen to see her sister.

Ram: It is just. .. . Nothing intended.

Anitha: BTW see this. Received.. today’s mail.

Ram: Oh .. an offer letter from M/s…& Co .. good good. Then, it is glad news of the day.

Anitha: It is glad news for me alone.

Gene: I know that company. It is a reputed marriage consultancy firm. Experts in arranging remarriages in short notice..

Ram: Going thro the developments, I think the Gene should be packed in a bottle and disposed safely and immediately. Not a good one I believe.

Anitha: For me it is Good one bcos of offer letter.

Next day morning

Calling Bell rings

Ram: Who is that? So early in the morning? Anitha just see.

Anitha: Oh, it is Sumi. Welcome. Hai Nisha? How are you? How come you along with Sumi..?

Nisha: She is my sister. How are you Anitha?

Anitha: Nice. So glad to see yah

Sumi: Ram, here is your Mobile. We both came just to return this. We are on our way for shopping for today’s Birthday Party. Hope you both are coming.

Sumi: BTW I forget. Ram show me your wrist. We both love to tie rakhi to our brother as today being Raksha Bandan.

Ram: Oh nice.... and thanks. Thro this act you convey your prayers for my well being. I, now reciprocate my obligation of love to protect you both. Here is my gift.
(Ram Offers her sweet in return)

Ram: Anitha are you free dear for the Birth day Party?

Anitha: Now I am so free. BTW Nisha is my class mate and how I can miss this party. We are both going. Okay?

Ram: Okay Sumi. Shall meet in the evening.

Ram: Anitha you are yet to see the Gift in the Big box.

Anitha: What is that Ram?

Ram: It is a steel lock brown handbag for my sister.

Gene: What shall I do?

Ram: Go away, don’t waste our time. Find your partner. Now don’t disturb us. We are in very Romantic mood after a l...o....n....g time!!



With regards:)
 
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Good ,Good, Good..

One more Entry... Thanks Balasubramani Sir..

Now Auh ji will have a tough time selecting the best entry..
 
It is picking up now.. one more entry will liven the contest!! Auh ji is judge , that rules out him, then who can it be... pedders is busy with her books.. Raji madam can do it, will she enter the fray?
 
Selections by the judge ..for what..? Best of the story or best of the reel..? . In my opinion Renuka Madam will win thumbs

down.. !!


TVK
 
Story continues...

Ram:Genie! You expect me to believe you?

When you 1st came out the of the bottle you said that you hid in the bottle to avoid eating Anitha's More Kuzhambhu is in a previous birth..now what is this new reel you are spinning?

Genie: Actually I did not know Anitha in my previous birth.It is just that I do not like More Kuzhambu.

Ram: So..what do we have now??..a lying Genie?

Genie: Don't call me a liar..after all I granted all your wishes.

Ram:But that 3rd wish..you screwed it up didn't you?

Genie:That was not my fault..you were not specific.

Ram:Anyway I have hardly time to waste now..big day ahead tomorrow need to attend Sumi's Bday party and also see Sumi's sister Shashirekha...she is so so ..

Genie:So So what??

Ram:How will you understand??

Genie: Can I also come along with you for the Bday party?

Ram: You?? Hey..wont people get scared of seeing a 7 foot tall Genie??

Genie: You seem ill informed..I can change my appearance and size at my own will.I can make myself looking like a normal human too.

Ram: We will decide tomorrow..I need to get some sleep now.

Ram goes upstairs and Anitha was lying on the bed..he snuggles next to her and tells her that he wants to attend the Bday party tomorrow.

Anitha: What does that Sumi think of herself..saying that just becos I do not work I must be free to come pick up the cellphone?
Does she really think that a housewife has no work?

Ram: Anitha sweetie..don't worry..I do not think that is what she really meant.

Anitha: Than what did she really mean?

Ram:Anitha..women do not think sometimes before they speak.

Anitha:Oh..so now you are finding fault with women??

Ram: Anitha..why can't you understand that a man has a tough time sometimes understanding how a woman's mind works?

Anitha: If you can not understand a woman than why you married a woman?

Ram: Then marry whom?

Anitha : Ram just leave it..Ok Ok I will come for the party just for your sake.BTW Sumi mentioned that you have to meet her sister..what is that about?

Ram: Anitha lets go to sleep it is late.

To be continued...on Monday.
 
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Auh ji

The story is at a very interesting stage now thanks to renukaji;

She is doing very well; let her complete the story.

Now i wish some of you join me in a sort of chain story writing , a satire type ;

Can I count you, renukaji, Balasubramani Sir, Padders ji, and who else?

Who ever is interested please give me reply so that i can send Private message about the story line.. which each one of us will write a small part,, once a week.
 
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