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Complete the Story Contest
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renuka
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Story continues...
Its 4 am in the morning and Genie bangs at Ram's bedroom door.
Ram:Who is it at this wee hours of morning?
Genie: Its me..Genie.
Ram:What the hell do you want?
Genie: Is this how you talk in the morning?? Using words like hell at Brahmamuhurtam? I was waking you up cos it is time for you to pray.
Ram:Genie..just get back downstairs and let me sleep!
Genie:Ram..I thought you would at least get up and pray..why are you still sleeping?
Ram:Genieeeeeeeeeeee....let me sleep!
Genie goes back downstairs and does some housework..cleans the house...takes his bath and switches on the Suprabhatam CD and makes breakfast for Ram and Anitha.
When Ram and Anitha get up and come downstairs..Anitha was just lost for words to see her house spotless and breakfast ready.
Anitha: Genie you are a sweetheart!
Then she turns to Ram.
Anitha: Ram! Have you ever even one day done something like this for me?
Ram: Anitha..I work from 10 hours a day and you want me to do housework too? Try to be a bit fair to me..you are a housewife it is your work to keep the house spic and span.
Anitha: Yeah Yeah..I am just a housewife isnt it? Just like what the Sumi said!
Ram: Anitha..please don't ruin my mood in the morning.Lets have breakfast.
After breakfast Genie asks Ram again if he can come to the Bday party.
Ram:Ok Genie..you can..but please make yourself look somewhat like me so that I can tell everyone that you are my cousin.
Genie: Done! (Genie then takes a human form looking somewhat like Ram but more handsome)
The day passes by and everyone gets ready to go for the party.
Anitha wore a beautiful blue saree with a sequinned blouse.
Genie was dressed smartly in a nice well cut pants and a colorful shirt.
Ram too looked dashing....all of the left for the Bday party.
When they reached there..Sumi greeted them at the door.She was kind of surprised to see Genie.
Sumi : Have we met?
Genie: I believe not..I am Ram's cousin Manoj. I am here on a short holiday.
Sumi: Glad to meet you Manoj.
Sumi then hugs Anitha and welcomes all of them in.
Ram meanwhile was scanning the room for Sumi's sister Shashirekha.
Ram: Sumi..where is Shashi?
Sumi: Oh..Shashi?? Today she had to stay back late at work...some tender to finish..contract managers are always busy.
Ram:What time will she back?
Sumi: May be by 12 midnight.
Ram: What??? Midnight??
Anitha overhears their conversation...
Anitha: Why Ram? Is there a problem here?
Ram : Nothing..nothing...it is just that Shashi is coming home only at midnight.
Anitha: So late?
Ram: Yup...I wanted you to meet her too.
(Ram thinks he has to cook up some story to make Anitha wait till midnight..he really finds Shashi hot and had been planning to ask her out for a date..if only Anitha knew his intentions he would be dead meat..so he thinks of a plan)
Ram: Anitha..I was thinking actually to match Shashi with your uncle's son who is still not married.
Anitha: Oh Anand? Wow how nice of you Ram to think of this.
Sumi: BTW is Anand in IT and US based?
Anitha: Yes....why?
Sumi: Cos Shashi is looking for a US based IT software engineer.
Anitha: That would be great! Ram..we will wait for Shashi to come..I don't mind waiting till midnight..Anand has been looking for a bride for a long time.
Ram: Sure sure..we will wait.
(Meanwhile Genie was having a great time at the party making everyone laugh with his jokes)
Sumi: Your cousin Manoj..he seems to be one heck of a guy.Everyone at the party seems to love him.He seem very attractive too.
I am sure Shashi too would find him interesting.
Ram: Yes..Manoj is a jovial guy.
(Ram starts to feel uneasy that everyone is finds Genie cool..anyway Ram keeps staring at the clock and clock shows 11.45pm....Ram just cant wait till 12 midnight cos he really wanted to see Shashi and try to make a move on her..Ram gave a damn if he was married cos he always found Shashi hot..Anitha was just homely sorts...then Genie comes near Ram and whispers)
Genie: Ram..I forgot to tell you that we have to go home before midnight.
Ram gets anxious..
Ram: Why?? I thought you are having fun..everyone finds you cool.
Genie: Ram..there is a slight problem...you see I made myself look like a human.
Ram: So?? What is the problem?
Genie : You see I used magic and that magic only lasts till midnight..when the clock strikes 12, I would be back to my original form.
I am sure you would not want the guest at the party to be scared to death!
Ram: You stupid Genie! Why are you telling this to me only now. If I had known this I would have never brought you to the party.
Shashi is only coming back at midnight and now you tell me we have to leave!
Genie: There is only 2 minutes left..we have to go before I change back to a Genie.
Ram calls for Anitha and tells Sumi thank you for everything and then quickly rushes out of the house.
Anitha wonders what the matter is.
Anitha: Ram..what is the hurry? I thought we are supposed to wait for Shashi.
Ram :Ask that Genie! He says his human form lasts only till 12 midnight after that he becomes a Genie again.So lets go!
As they leave the suddenly at the gate Shashi arrives..the time is 11.59pm.
Shashi looks beautiful wearing a sleeveless tank top with pants.
Her right arm has a crescent shaped birth mark.
Genie looks at her and recognizes the birth mark and calls out loudly...
Genie: MY CHANDRAMUKHI ! Where have you been all my life??
Anitha,Ram and Shashi all turn to look at Genie.
At the same time the clock strikes 12 and Genie gets back his 7 foot Genie form.
Shashi screams out of fright and falls down and hits her head on a stone.
Ram:Genie..just go..you can't be here..others will get scared.
Genie: but my Chandramukhi??
Ram: Just go!
Genie leaves sadly.
Ram calls for Sumi...Sumi comes running.
Ram: Shashi slipped and fell down while coming in... she is unconscious...lets take her to the hospital right away.
to be continued....
Its 4 am in the morning and Genie bangs at Ram's bedroom door.
Ram:Who is it at this wee hours of morning?
Genie: Its me..Genie.
Ram:What the hell do you want?
Genie: Is this how you talk in the morning?? Using words like hell at Brahmamuhurtam? I was waking you up cos it is time for you to pray.
Ram:Genie..just get back downstairs and let me sleep!
Genie:Ram..I thought you would at least get up and pray..why are you still sleeping?
Ram:Genieeeeeeeeeeee....let me sleep!
Genie goes back downstairs and does some housework..cleans the house...takes his bath and switches on the Suprabhatam CD and makes breakfast for Ram and Anitha.
When Ram and Anitha get up and come downstairs..Anitha was just lost for words to see her house spotless and breakfast ready.
Anitha: Genie you are a sweetheart!
Then she turns to Ram.
Anitha: Ram! Have you ever even one day done something like this for me?
Ram: Anitha..I work from 10 hours a day and you want me to do housework too? Try to be a bit fair to me..you are a housewife it is your work to keep the house spic and span.
Anitha: Yeah Yeah..I am just a housewife isnt it? Just like what the Sumi said!
Ram: Anitha..please don't ruin my mood in the morning.Lets have breakfast.
After breakfast Genie asks Ram again if he can come to the Bday party.
Ram:Ok Genie..you can..but please make yourself look somewhat like me so that I can tell everyone that you are my cousin.
Genie: Done! (Genie then takes a human form looking somewhat like Ram but more handsome)
The day passes by and everyone gets ready to go for the party.
Anitha wore a beautiful blue saree with a sequinned blouse.
Genie was dressed smartly in a nice well cut pants and a colorful shirt.
Ram too looked dashing....all of the left for the Bday party.
When they reached there..Sumi greeted them at the door.She was kind of surprised to see Genie.
Sumi : Have we met?
Genie: I believe not..I am Ram's cousin Manoj. I am here on a short holiday.
Sumi: Glad to meet you Manoj.
Sumi then hugs Anitha and welcomes all of them in.
Ram meanwhile was scanning the room for Sumi's sister Shashirekha.
Ram: Sumi..where is Shashi?
Sumi: Oh..Shashi?? Today she had to stay back late at work...some tender to finish..contract managers are always busy.
Ram:What time will she back?
Sumi: May be by 12 midnight.
Ram: What??? Midnight??
Anitha overhears their conversation...
Anitha: Why Ram? Is there a problem here?
Ram : Nothing..nothing...it is just that Shashi is coming home only at midnight.
Anitha: So late?
Ram: Yup...I wanted you to meet her too.
(Ram thinks he has to cook up some story to make Anitha wait till midnight..he really finds Shashi hot and had been planning to ask her out for a date..if only Anitha knew his intentions he would be dead meat..so he thinks of a plan)
Ram: Anitha..I was thinking actually to match Shashi with your uncle's son who is still not married.
Anitha: Oh Anand? Wow how nice of you Ram to think of this.
Sumi: BTW is Anand in IT and US based?
Anitha: Yes....why?
Sumi: Cos Shashi is looking for a US based IT software engineer.
Anitha: That would be great! Ram..we will wait for Shashi to come..I don't mind waiting till midnight..Anand has been looking for a bride for a long time.
Ram: Sure sure..we will wait.
(Meanwhile Genie was having a great time at the party making everyone laugh with his jokes)
Sumi: Your cousin Manoj..he seems to be one heck of a guy.Everyone at the party seems to love him.He seem very attractive too.
I am sure Shashi too would find him interesting.
Ram: Yes..Manoj is a jovial guy.
(Ram starts to feel uneasy that everyone is finds Genie cool..anyway Ram keeps staring at the clock and clock shows 11.45pm....Ram just cant wait till 12 midnight cos he really wanted to see Shashi and try to make a move on her..Ram gave a damn if he was married cos he always found Shashi hot..Anitha was just homely sorts...then Genie comes near Ram and whispers)
Genie: Ram..I forgot to tell you that we have to go home before midnight.
Ram gets anxious..
Ram: Why?? I thought you are having fun..everyone finds you cool.
Genie: Ram..there is a slight problem...you see I made myself look like a human.
Ram: So?? What is the problem?
Genie : You see I used magic and that magic only lasts till midnight..when the clock strikes 12, I would be back to my original form.
I am sure you would not want the guest at the party to be scared to death!
Ram: You stupid Genie! Why are you telling this to me only now. If I had known this I would have never brought you to the party.
Shashi is only coming back at midnight and now you tell me we have to leave!
Genie: There is only 2 minutes left..we have to go before I change back to a Genie.
Ram calls for Anitha and tells Sumi thank you for everything and then quickly rushes out of the house.
Anitha wonders what the matter is.
Anitha: Ram..what is the hurry? I thought we are supposed to wait for Shashi.
Ram :Ask that Genie! He says his human form lasts only till 12 midnight after that he becomes a Genie again.So lets go!
As they leave the suddenly at the gate Shashi arrives..the time is 11.59pm.
Shashi looks beautiful wearing a sleeveless tank top with pants.
Her right arm has a crescent shaped birth mark.
Genie looks at her and recognizes the birth mark and calls out loudly...
Genie: MY CHANDRAMUKHI ! Where have you been all my life??
Anitha,Ram and Shashi all turn to look at Genie.
At the same time the clock strikes 12 and Genie gets back his 7 foot Genie form.
Shashi screams out of fright and falls down and hits her head on a stone.
Ram:Genie..just go..you can't be here..others will get scared.
Genie: but my Chandramukhi??
Ram: Just go!
Genie leaves sadly.
Ram calls for Sumi...Sumi comes running.
Ram: Shashi slipped and fell down while coming in... she is unconscious...lets take her to the hospital right away.
to be continued....
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renuka
Well-known member
Dear PJ sir,
Thanks...the story will end very soon..may be just 1 or 2 episodes more.
Exam was good..no problems..it was my final part of my 2 year Sanskrit course.
renuka
Well-known member
Story continues...
Shashi is rushed to hospital.
Ram and Anitha also follow Sumi to help out.
Shashi is admitted and diagnosed as having a cerebral concussion and is in stable condition but yet to regain full consciousness.
Everyone is relieved that nothing serious and doctors informed Sumi that Shashi should be regaining consciousness anytime soon.
Sumi :Thank God Shashi is alright..can't wait for her to regain consciousness.
Ram: Don't worry..everything will be fine.
Sumi : How did she fall?? What happened Ram?
Ram : (Ram does not know what to say)..Don't worry Sumi..she is out of danger now..so lets pray for her to wake up soon.
Anitha : Ram..can I speak to you for a while outside the ward?
Ram: Sure..
Ram and Anitha leave the ward and go to the corridor.
Anitha :Ram..under any condition please do not tell Sumi about Genie.Then she will think we dabble with black magic and there will be no chance for me to match Anand and Shashi.
Ram thinks to himself...there goes his chance to ever asking Shashi out on a date..why did he ever suggest to match her with Anand and now Anitha is so serious about it.
Then there is Genie too..claiming that she is Chandramukhi!..Ram was in a fix!
Ram: Don't worry Anitha..I will not tell Sumi about Genie..who would believe us anyway??
Lets go home for a while and rest..will come back in the afternoon.You stay here and keep Sumi company..call me when Shashi wakes up.
Ram leaves for home and when he opens the door...he sees Genie crying.
Genie :Ram..how is my Chandramukhi?? I really did not mean to scare her..how would I have known that she would fall and faint after seeing my Genie form?
Ram :Hey Genie! I thought your curse is supposed to be lifted the day you meet Chandramukhi! So why are you still a Genie?
Genie: You dont understand Ram..she also has to recognize me and have love for me..only then my curse will be fully lifted.
Ram: I don't know but I am starting to think you are lying.
Genie: NOOOOOO..NOOOOO Ram I am not a liar..she is my Chandramukhi..she had the same crescent moon birth mark on her arm..that is why her parents named her Chandramukhi...they knew the moon birth mark denotes a beautiful girl.
Ram :Whatever..right now I want her to regain consciousness.
Genie: What?? She is still unconscious?
Ram: Yup! Thanks to you!
Genie :Ram..please do not blame me..can I see her?
Ram: What?? Haven't you caused enough damage already?You want her to faint again on seeing you?
Genie: No Ram..get her some vase with flowers and I will make myself small and hide in the vase.
Ram: What??
Genie: Please Ram..I need to see her.
Ram :Ok..let me catch some sleep..I will take you later in the evening may be.
Genie : Thanks Ram.
Ram tries to catch a few winks of sleep..then the phone rings...It was Anitha.
Anitha :Ram! Shashi has regain consciousness.
Ram :Oh Thank God.
Anitha: But..
Ram : But what Anitha?
Anitha :She does not seem to remember anything.She does not even recognize Sumi or anyone.
All she is asking is for some guy called Suryaveera.
Ram: Genieeeeeeeeeeee...lets go to the hospital..get inside that vase now!
To be continued....
Shashi is rushed to hospital.
Ram and Anitha also follow Sumi to help out.
Shashi is admitted and diagnosed as having a cerebral concussion and is in stable condition but yet to regain full consciousness.
Everyone is relieved that nothing serious and doctors informed Sumi that Shashi should be regaining consciousness anytime soon.
Sumi :Thank God Shashi is alright..can't wait for her to regain consciousness.
Ram: Don't worry..everything will be fine.
Sumi : How did she fall?? What happened Ram?
Ram : (Ram does not know what to say)..Don't worry Sumi..she is out of danger now..so lets pray for her to wake up soon.
Anitha : Ram..can I speak to you for a while outside the ward?
Ram: Sure..
Ram and Anitha leave the ward and go to the corridor.
Anitha :Ram..under any condition please do not tell Sumi about Genie.Then she will think we dabble with black magic and there will be no chance for me to match Anand and Shashi.
Ram thinks to himself...there goes his chance to ever asking Shashi out on a date..why did he ever suggest to match her with Anand and now Anitha is so serious about it.
Then there is Genie too..claiming that she is Chandramukhi!..Ram was in a fix!
Ram: Don't worry Anitha..I will not tell Sumi about Genie..who would believe us anyway??
Lets go home for a while and rest..will come back in the afternoon.You stay here and keep Sumi company..call me when Shashi wakes up.
Ram leaves for home and when he opens the door...he sees Genie crying.
Genie :Ram..how is my Chandramukhi?? I really did not mean to scare her..how would I have known that she would fall and faint after seeing my Genie form?
Ram :Hey Genie! I thought your curse is supposed to be lifted the day you meet Chandramukhi! So why are you still a Genie?
Genie: You dont understand Ram..she also has to recognize me and have love for me..only then my curse will be fully lifted.
Ram: I don't know but I am starting to think you are lying.
Genie: NOOOOOO..NOOOOO Ram I am not a liar..she is my Chandramukhi..she had the same crescent moon birth mark on her arm..that is why her parents named her Chandramukhi...they knew the moon birth mark denotes a beautiful girl.
Ram :Whatever..right now I want her to regain consciousness.
Genie: What?? She is still unconscious?
Ram: Yup! Thanks to you!
Genie :Ram..please do not blame me..can I see her?
Ram: What?? Haven't you caused enough damage already?You want her to faint again on seeing you?
Genie: No Ram..get her some vase with flowers and I will make myself small and hide in the vase.
Ram: What??
Genie: Please Ram..I need to see her.
Ram :Ok..let me catch some sleep..I will take you later in the evening may be.
Genie : Thanks Ram.
Ram tries to catch a few winks of sleep..then the phone rings...It was Anitha.
Anitha :Ram! Shashi has regain consciousness.
Ram :Oh Thank God.
Anitha: But..
Ram : But what Anitha?
Anitha :She does not seem to remember anything.She does not even recognize Sumi or anyone.
All she is asking is for some guy called Suryaveera.
Ram: Genieeeeeeeeeeee...lets go to the hospital..get inside that vase now!
To be continued....
renuka
Well-known member
Story continues....
Genie gets into a vase and Ram drives towards the hospital.
Ram: Genie..just wait in the car for a while..let me stop at the gift shop to buy artificial flowers to put in the vase.
Genie(from inside the bottle) : Ram..usually people buy fresh flowers for anyone admitted in the hospital.Why do you ever want to buy artificial flowers?
Ram: Hey Genie..you are quite dumb at times!
Genie: Me?? Dumb?? Why??
Ram: You are supposed to hide in the vase isnt it?
Genie: Yes...
Ram:So you idiot... if I were to place fresh flowers in the vase..surely I would have to fill it up with water..so what you want to do?? Drown??
Genie :Oh...I forgot..you are smart Ram...hehehehehehe
Ram: Ok wait here..let me go in the shop and get the flowers.
Ram goes in and comes out with some artificial roses and speeds off to the hospital.
He then goes to the ward Shashi is admitted with the vase of artificial flowers in his hand.
He opens the room door..
Anitha: Ram..you are here..
Ram: Anitha just place this vase near Shashi's bedside.
Anitha :Artificial flowers..that's odd.
Sumi walks in..
Sumi :Ram..I am really worried..Shashi does not even recognize me.All she keeps asking for is for Suryaveera.
As far as I know she has no boyfriend.
But she also claims that Suryaveera is her husband!
That is the worst part... Why would she even claimed to be married?
I wonder if there is something about my sister I do not know about...
Anitha: Sumi..don't worry..didn't the doctor say sometimes transient memory loss happens with cerebral concussion.
Sumi: I know ..but it is scary to hear Shashi's stories..she keeps saying how she was playing in the river with her husband and then she hid behind a rock and he thought she had gone underwater and dived looking for her.
Then she starts crying saying that he never came out of the water and that's all she remembers and cries for him.She is asleep now.
Ram: Sumi..I feel just do not worry too much.
Let Shashi sleep..may be we should go to the nearby temple and pray for her.
Ram,Anitha and Sumi go to the nearby temple and pray for Shashi.
Meanwhile Genie is in the vase..looking sadly at Shashi.
Since he was alone he decided to come out of the vase to speak to Shashi.
He comes out the vase and stands near Shashi and gently whispers...
Genie: Chandramukhi.....I am here.
Shashi is fast asleep and does not hear him.
Genie: Chandramukhi...I am your Suryaveera..look at me dear.
Shashi then wakes up and sees Genie next to her and screams very loudly till the nurses come running to the room.
Genie quickly gets back into the vase.
Nurse: What happened Shashi?
Shashi :I saw a huge figure next to me..I think it is a ghost. O' God..what is happening to me??
Shashi then starts crying and screaming hysterically.
Ram,Anitha and Sumi were walking right in when they heard her scream and cry.
Sumi: Nurse..what happened?
Nurse :Shashi said she keeps seeing a ghost. I will inform the doctor now.
Doctor comes to the room..examines Shashi and sedates her.
Doctor: This is a strange case...her concussion is just too mild to cause hallucinations.
The doctor then turns to Sumi.
Doctor: Does your sister have any past history of depression or any hallucination?
Sumi: No doctor..nothing..she is a perfectly healthy person.
Doctor :Ok never mind..I have sedated her now..let her rest..I will examine her again later.
Sumi gets more worried and does not know what to do.
Ram meanwhile suspects Genie must have shown himself to Shashi and stares at the vase.
Ram: Sumi..you rest and go home..Anitha and I will look after Shashi for a few hours..you should rest.
Sumi goes home and Anitha lies down on the couch and takes a nap.
Ram meanwhile talks to Genie..
Ram: Genie..so what happened?
Genie: Ram..this is not working out..she does not recognize me..I don't think she will ever recognize me..I also can't bear to see her suffer.
She does not recognize anyone..not even those in her present life nor her past life.
My poor Chandramukhi..I want her to be happy..she is neither in the present nor in the past.
Ram: Genie..don't give up hope so fast.
Meanwhile doctor walks in and speaks to Ram.
Doctor :Ram could you tell Sumi that her sister seems to be in a depression and she should be in calm atmosphere and not exposed to any form of anxiety or extremes of moods..so I advise everyone to not to display emotions in front of her..try to make her happy..I am afraid that there is going to be some delay in her regaining her memory if she sinks into a depression.
The Doctor then leaves the room..
Genie: Ram..can you take me back home ?
Ram :Why Genie?
Genie :I can't be here anymore...I will only add to her anxiety I do not want to see her suffer.
Ram : Genie I can't take you home now..I promised Sumi I will look after Shashi till she comes back.
Genie: Ok I guess in that case I have no choice but to use my Save Mode.
Lock the room door Ram.
Ram locks the room door.
Ram :What is Save Mode ??
Genie: A Genie grants wishes to people but a Genie has the ability to make only one wish for himself and that is called Save Mode.
Save Mode can only be used to save someone from danger or any situation and the outcome of this Save Mode can in no way be beneficial to the Genie.
I am going to use Save Mode and make Shashi regain her present life memory.
Ram: But Genie....then she will never ever know you?
Genie: It does not matter Ram...I love her..that is what that really matters.I can't bear to see her suffer anymore..she has to be normal again.
But Ram...the Save Mode does come with a heavy price for the Genie.
Ram : What??
Genie: Yes..when a Genie uses Save Mode he will start to disintegrate.
Ram :You mean to say you will die?
Genie: Yes..if that is the way you would like to call it..
Ram :NOOOOOOOOOOOO...NOOOOOOOOO Genie please do not do this.
I have learnt so much about true love from you.I never used to take my marriage seriously..I was such a flirt.I never even kept the picture of Anitha and me on my desk in my office cos I did not want people to know I am married..but you..you changed me...you showed me what true love is..you waited so long for your true love and now when she is right in front of you..you are even willing to give up your life for her..
Ram starts to cry...
Genie: Ram....look at me..
Genie's body the starts to disintegrate slowly...Genie had made the wish..he had used Save Mode for Shashi.
Genie :Ram..my soul will be gone soon but my physical body will turn into a four leaf clover..keep it.. that is all you will have of me..keep it with you..it will be lucky for you.
Genie's body disintegrates and a four leaf clover floats in the air and lands on Ram's out streched hand.
Shashi wakes up...
Shashi: Ram.....where is Sumi??
To be continued...Tomorrow is the final part.
Genie gets into a vase and Ram drives towards the hospital.
Ram: Genie..just wait in the car for a while..let me stop at the gift shop to buy artificial flowers to put in the vase.
Genie(from inside the bottle) : Ram..usually people buy fresh flowers for anyone admitted in the hospital.Why do you ever want to buy artificial flowers?
Ram: Hey Genie..you are quite dumb at times!
Genie: Me?? Dumb?? Why??
Ram: You are supposed to hide in the vase isnt it?
Genie: Yes...
Ram:So you idiot... if I were to place fresh flowers in the vase..surely I would have to fill it up with water..so what you want to do?? Drown??
Genie :Oh...I forgot..you are smart Ram...hehehehehehe
Ram: Ok wait here..let me go in the shop and get the flowers.
Ram goes in and comes out with some artificial roses and speeds off to the hospital.
He then goes to the ward Shashi is admitted with the vase of artificial flowers in his hand.
He opens the room door..
Anitha: Ram..you are here..
Ram: Anitha just place this vase near Shashi's bedside.
Anitha :Artificial flowers..that's odd.
Sumi walks in..
Sumi :Ram..I am really worried..Shashi does not even recognize me.All she keeps asking for is for Suryaveera.
As far as I know she has no boyfriend.
But she also claims that Suryaveera is her husband!
That is the worst part... Why would she even claimed to be married?
I wonder if there is something about my sister I do not know about...
Anitha: Sumi..don't worry..didn't the doctor say sometimes transient memory loss happens with cerebral concussion.
Sumi: I know ..but it is scary to hear Shashi's stories..she keeps saying how she was playing in the river with her husband and then she hid behind a rock and he thought she had gone underwater and dived looking for her.
Then she starts crying saying that he never came out of the water and that's all she remembers and cries for him.She is asleep now.
Ram: Sumi..I feel just do not worry too much.
Let Shashi sleep..may be we should go to the nearby temple and pray for her.
Ram,Anitha and Sumi go to the nearby temple and pray for Shashi.
Meanwhile Genie is in the vase..looking sadly at Shashi.
Since he was alone he decided to come out of the vase to speak to Shashi.
He comes out the vase and stands near Shashi and gently whispers...
Genie: Chandramukhi.....I am here.
Shashi is fast asleep and does not hear him.
Genie: Chandramukhi...I am your Suryaveera..look at me dear.
Shashi then wakes up and sees Genie next to her and screams very loudly till the nurses come running to the room.
Genie quickly gets back into the vase.
Nurse: What happened Shashi?
Shashi :I saw a huge figure next to me..I think it is a ghost. O' God..what is happening to me??
Shashi then starts crying and screaming hysterically.
Ram,Anitha and Sumi were walking right in when they heard her scream and cry.
Sumi: Nurse..what happened?
Nurse :Shashi said she keeps seeing a ghost. I will inform the doctor now.
Doctor comes to the room..examines Shashi and sedates her.
Doctor: This is a strange case...her concussion is just too mild to cause hallucinations.
The doctor then turns to Sumi.
Doctor: Does your sister have any past history of depression or any hallucination?
Sumi: No doctor..nothing..she is a perfectly healthy person.
Doctor :Ok never mind..I have sedated her now..let her rest..I will examine her again later.
Sumi gets more worried and does not know what to do.
Ram meanwhile suspects Genie must have shown himself to Shashi and stares at the vase.
Ram: Sumi..you rest and go home..Anitha and I will look after Shashi for a few hours..you should rest.
Sumi goes home and Anitha lies down on the couch and takes a nap.
Ram meanwhile talks to Genie..
Ram: Genie..so what happened?
Genie: Ram..this is not working out..she does not recognize me..I don't think she will ever recognize me..I also can't bear to see her suffer.
She does not recognize anyone..not even those in her present life nor her past life.
My poor Chandramukhi..I want her to be happy..she is neither in the present nor in the past.
Ram: Genie..don't give up hope so fast.
Meanwhile doctor walks in and speaks to Ram.
Doctor :Ram could you tell Sumi that her sister seems to be in a depression and she should be in calm atmosphere and not exposed to any form of anxiety or extremes of moods..so I advise everyone to not to display emotions in front of her..try to make her happy..I am afraid that there is going to be some delay in her regaining her memory if she sinks into a depression.
The Doctor then leaves the room..
Genie: Ram..can you take me back home ?
Ram :Why Genie?
Genie :I can't be here anymore...I will only add to her anxiety I do not want to see her suffer.
Ram : Genie I can't take you home now..I promised Sumi I will look after Shashi till she comes back.
Genie: Ok I guess in that case I have no choice but to use my Save Mode.
Lock the room door Ram.
Ram locks the room door.
Ram :What is Save Mode ??
Genie: A Genie grants wishes to people but a Genie has the ability to make only one wish for himself and that is called Save Mode.
Save Mode can only be used to save someone from danger or any situation and the outcome of this Save Mode can in no way be beneficial to the Genie.
I am going to use Save Mode and make Shashi regain her present life memory.
Ram: But Genie....then she will never ever know you?
Genie: It does not matter Ram...I love her..that is what that really matters.I can't bear to see her suffer anymore..she has to be normal again.
But Ram...the Save Mode does come with a heavy price for the Genie.
Ram : What??
Genie: Yes..when a Genie uses Save Mode he will start to disintegrate.
Ram :You mean to say you will die?
Genie: Yes..if that is the way you would like to call it..
Ram :NOOOOOOOOOOOO...NOOOOOOOOO Genie please do not do this.
I have learnt so much about true love from you.I never used to take my marriage seriously..I was such a flirt.I never even kept the picture of Anitha and me on my desk in my office cos I did not want people to know I am married..but you..you changed me...you showed me what true love is..you waited so long for your true love and now when she is right in front of you..you are even willing to give up your life for her..
Ram starts to cry...
Genie: Ram....look at me..
Genie's body the starts to disintegrate slowly...Genie had made the wish..he had used Save Mode for Shashi.
Genie :Ram..my soul will be gone soon but my physical body will turn into a four leaf clover..keep it.. that is all you will have of me..keep it with you..it will be lucky for you.
Genie's body disintegrates and a four leaf clover floats in the air and lands on Ram's out streched hand.
Shashi wakes up...
Shashi: Ram.....where is Sumi??
To be continued...Tomorrow is the final part.
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Ram wakes Anitha up..
Ram :Anitha..wake up..wake up..Shashi seems to have regained her memory..she just called out my name and is asking for Sumi.
Anitha: What?? got back here memory?? Thank God!
Anitha goes towards Shashi..
Anitha :Shashi...I am so glad to see you back to normal.
Shashi: Anitha? Yes Yes..I remember you..we met briefly at Sumi's bday party before I blacked out.
Where is Sumi?
Ram: Sumi has gone home for a while...we told her to take rest..she has been worried sick for you and has not slept even a wink looking after you and praying so hard for you.
Shashi : Sumi is like a mother for me..as you know Ram..we became orphaned when we were young and Sumi played a role of a mother for me..she loves me no end...she even refused all marriage proposals cos she wants me to marry first..she really loves me.
Anitha: Oh..coming to marriage proposals..My cousin Anand is looking for a bride..
Ram : Anitha..can we not talk about marriage now..please call Sumi and let her know Shashi is alright now.
Shashi:Let me talk to Sumi..
Anitha calls Sumi and hands her Shashi the phone.
Shashi: Sumi...its me!
Sumi(on the other end of the phone) : OMG Shashi! You regained your memory! I am over joyed sweetheart! O' Thank God! I prayed so hard for you..
Sumi starts to breakdown and cry in happiness.
Shashi: Sumi..you take a rest and come..please sleep for at least 1 hour ok..Ram and Anitha are here..they will look after me till then.
Sumi: I want to come now..I cant wait to see you.
Shashi
lease sleep first..do not drive when you are tired..I dont want anything happening to you.
Sumi :Ok Shashi if you say so...I will take a short nap first..love you.
Shashi ends the call then speaks to Ram and Anitha.
Shashi :Who is Anand?
Anitha :My cousin..he is looking for a bride..He is here in US..software engineer.
Shashi : You know..I must tell you both this..all I remember before I fell down and blacked out was seeing a huge god knows what calling out to me "Chandramukhi"..I was really freaking scared to see that creature..it looked like some Genie!
Then you know I also had some weird dreams..that I was actually married to some guy called Suryaveera and I was his wife and I was playing with him in a river..some weird dream..dont know what it is..may be I must have injured my head in that fall and had all these dreams..anyway I am glad I am Ok now..but wait..this vase is here!
I remember seeing that Genie near that vase..Yes Yes..it was here in my room..I am quite sure I was awake that time.
And one more thing..Its voice was like the guy Suryaveera in my dream..that is the weird part.
Was I hallucinating?
Anitha : O" Shashi..don't think too hard..you know my cousin Anand..he is such a good boy..never had a girlfriend ever in his life...you know..he is..
Ram: Stop it Anitha! Enough of that!
Anitha: What do you mean Ram? I thought you wanted to match Anand with her?
Ram: Yes..sort of..but not anymore..
Anitha: What??
Ram: Shashi deserves to know the truth!
Anitha :Ram..don't tell me..its about that Genie!
OMG you must be nuts..you want her to pair up with a guy who lives in a bottle??
Shashi: Can anyone tell me what is going on here??
Anitha: Don't even bother to listen Shashi.
Ram: Anitha! I did not expect you to be so self centered..one of the reasons I hardly paid attention to you is becos I found you a bit too self centred..always thinking of your benefit or your family's benefit.
Anitha:Looks who is talking..the number 1 flirt!
Ram: I am a changed person now..all becos Genie..a.k.a Suryaveera showed me what true love is.
Shashi: Please Please..stop arguing..let me know what is going on..who is Genie? Who is Suryaveera..I thought that was just a dream or my hallucination..tell me please..
Ram : Shashi..you need to know the truth..that was no dream or hallucination..It was real..your past birth! Genie is real..he is Suryaveera the man who gave up his life for you just moments before you regained your memory!
Shashi: What???
Ram: Yes Shashi..
Ram then proceeds to tell Shashi everything and finally says..
Ram: This is all that is left of him..a four leaf clover.
I feel you should keep this..a remembrance of true love.
Shashi :Oh No...What have I done?? Why did I not recognize him?
Ram: Don't blame yourself Shashi..how could you have recognized him too..he was in the form of a Genie.
Shashi: Yes I know but his voice..that sounded very much like in my dream.
Ram: Anyway Shashi..nothing can be done now..just at least pray for his soul to rest in peace.
Shashi is overcome by emotions and holds the four leaf clover in her hand and kisses it lightly..
Shashi :Surya..I have faith and hope..that one day we will meet again..and our true love will blossom again and this time we will be lucky enough to be together forever and ever.
I will keep this clover for ever and ever.
Shashi's tear drop falls on the clover and all of a sudden the clover goes high up in the air and spins in circles.
A gentle cool breeze blows on Shashi's face and the next moment a handsome figure stands near her.
He calls out to her...: Shashi..my Chandramukhi...you resurrected me!
Shashi: Suryaveera??
Suryaveera :Yes..I am your Surya.
Shashi :OMG this can't be true.
Surya: Yes it is true.
Shashi :But how?? I thought you had moved on.
Surya: Remember Shashi..you said you have Faith,Hope,Love and wished for Luck just now that we will meet again someday?
Shashi: Yes Surya.
Surya:Well my dear..that is what a four leaf clover stands for.Faith,Hope,Love and Luck..and your sincere tears recognized our love and I am here my love..never again shall we be apart.
Shashi hugs Surya and cries..
Sumi walks in the room..
Sumi: Can anyone tell me what is going on?
Ram: Shashi will tell you and BTW meet Suryaveera.
Ram winks at Surya and tells Anitha....
Ram: Anitha..lets go home..I am tired....Surya and Shashi have a lot of catching up to do.
Sumi: Now what is going on?? Can anyone tell me.
Ram and Anitha start laughing and leave the room and go to their car.
Anitha: Ram I am sorry...I realized myself what true selflessness is from Genie..I mean Surya.
Ram:Surya has taught us about love and selflessness..I promise you I will pay you all the attention in the world but I wont stop flirting!
Anitha:What??
Ram:Flirting only with you..my sweet doll.
Anitha laughs..
Anitha:But what about Anand??
Ram :Aiyoo..Anand! Anand! Anand!..hey what about Sumi?? We can match them both!
Now Shashi has Surya..so Sumi can get married isnt it?
Anitha: Yes Yes..good idea..let me call Anand now.
Ram: Later Anitha..let me stop at the gift shop first.
Anitha: Why??
Ram: My dear..I want to buy a small photo frame to keep our marriage photograph on my office desk.
Just wait for a while dear..I will make a quick dash in the shop to buy one.
Anitha: Ok..take your time.
Ram goes into the gift shop..he sees a cute silver photo frame and takes it from the display shelf.
As he was taking it..his elbow accidentally hits a small bottle on the next shelf.
The small bottle fell down and the cork of the bottle came off!
All of a sudden the room gets filled with a fragrant blue smoke and Ram could hear a Booming voice singing>>
Then right in front of Ram's eyes..a form takes shape..
Ram :OMG! A Punjabi Genie!
Ram thinks...(I don't want to know his love story..as it is he is already singing about love..I am out of here)
Ram dashes out of the gift shop..The Punjabi Genie runs after him.
Punjabi Genie: Oyeeeeeeeeeee Ram Bhaiya....Kahaan Jaa Rahe Ho..Wait for me Yaar...
Akele Akele Kahaan Jaa Rahe Ho
Hamen Saath Le Lo Jahaan Jaa Rahe Ho...
____________________________ THE END ______________________
Ram :Anitha..wake up..wake up..Shashi seems to have regained her memory..she just called out my name and is asking for Sumi.
Anitha: What?? got back here memory?? Thank God!
Anitha goes towards Shashi..
Anitha :Shashi...I am so glad to see you back to normal.
Shashi: Anitha? Yes Yes..I remember you..we met briefly at Sumi's bday party before I blacked out.
Where is Sumi?
Ram: Sumi has gone home for a while...we told her to take rest..she has been worried sick for you and has not slept even a wink looking after you and praying so hard for you.
Shashi : Sumi is like a mother for me..as you know Ram..we became orphaned when we were young and Sumi played a role of a mother for me..she loves me no end...she even refused all marriage proposals cos she wants me to marry first..she really loves me.
Anitha: Oh..coming to marriage proposals..My cousin Anand is looking for a bride..
Ram : Anitha..can we not talk about marriage now..please call Sumi and let her know Shashi is alright now.
Shashi:Let me talk to Sumi..
Anitha calls Sumi and hands her Shashi the phone.
Shashi: Sumi...its me!
Sumi(on the other end of the phone) : OMG Shashi! You regained your memory! I am over joyed sweetheart! O' Thank God! I prayed so hard for you..
Sumi starts to breakdown and cry in happiness.
Shashi: Sumi..you take a rest and come..please sleep for at least 1 hour ok..Ram and Anitha are here..they will look after me till then.
Sumi: I want to come now..I cant wait to see you.
Shashi
lease sleep first..do not drive when you are tired..I dont want anything happening to you.Sumi :Ok Shashi if you say so...I will take a short nap first..love you.
Shashi ends the call then speaks to Ram and Anitha.
Shashi :Who is Anand?
Anitha :My cousin..he is looking for a bride..He is here in US..software engineer.
Shashi : You know..I must tell you both this..all I remember before I fell down and blacked out was seeing a huge god knows what calling out to me "Chandramukhi"..I was really freaking scared to see that creature..it looked like some Genie!
Then you know I also had some weird dreams..that I was actually married to some guy called Suryaveera and I was his wife and I was playing with him in a river..some weird dream..dont know what it is..may be I must have injured my head in that fall and had all these dreams..anyway I am glad I am Ok now..but wait..this vase is here!
I remember seeing that Genie near that vase..Yes Yes..it was here in my room..I am quite sure I was awake that time.
And one more thing..Its voice was like the guy Suryaveera in my dream..that is the weird part.
Was I hallucinating?
Anitha : O" Shashi..don't think too hard..you know my cousin Anand..he is such a good boy..never had a girlfriend ever in his life...you know..he is..
Ram: Stop it Anitha! Enough of that!
Anitha: What do you mean Ram? I thought you wanted to match Anand with her?
Ram: Yes..sort of..but not anymore..
Anitha: What??
Ram: Shashi deserves to know the truth!
Anitha :Ram..don't tell me..its about that Genie!
OMG you must be nuts..you want her to pair up with a guy who lives in a bottle??
Shashi: Can anyone tell me what is going on here??
Anitha: Don't even bother to listen Shashi.
Ram: Anitha! I did not expect you to be so self centered..one of the reasons I hardly paid attention to you is becos I found you a bit too self centred..always thinking of your benefit or your family's benefit.
Anitha:Looks who is talking..the number 1 flirt!
Ram: I am a changed person now..all becos Genie..a.k.a Suryaveera showed me what true love is.
Shashi: Please Please..stop arguing..let me know what is going on..who is Genie? Who is Suryaveera..I thought that was just a dream or my hallucination..tell me please..
Ram : Shashi..you need to know the truth..that was no dream or hallucination..It was real..your past birth! Genie is real..he is Suryaveera the man who gave up his life for you just moments before you regained your memory!
Shashi: What???
Ram: Yes Shashi..
Ram then proceeds to tell Shashi everything and finally says..
Ram: This is all that is left of him..a four leaf clover.
I feel you should keep this..a remembrance of true love.
Shashi :Oh No...What have I done?? Why did I not recognize him?
Ram: Don't blame yourself Shashi..how could you have recognized him too..he was in the form of a Genie.
Shashi: Yes I know but his voice..that sounded very much like in my dream.
Ram: Anyway Shashi..nothing can be done now..just at least pray for his soul to rest in peace.
Shashi is overcome by emotions and holds the four leaf clover in her hand and kisses it lightly..
Shashi :Surya..I have faith and hope..that one day we will meet again..and our true love will blossom again and this time we will be lucky enough to be together forever and ever.
I will keep this clover for ever and ever.
Shashi's tear drop falls on the clover and all of a sudden the clover goes high up in the air and spins in circles.
A gentle cool breeze blows on Shashi's face and the next moment a handsome figure stands near her.
He calls out to her...: Shashi..my Chandramukhi...you resurrected me!
Shashi: Suryaveera??
Suryaveera :Yes..I am your Surya.
Shashi :OMG this can't be true.
Surya: Yes it is true.
Shashi :But how?? I thought you had moved on.
Surya: Remember Shashi..you said you have Faith,Hope,Love and wished for Luck just now that we will meet again someday?
Shashi: Yes Surya.
Surya:Well my dear..that is what a four leaf clover stands for.Faith,Hope,Love and Luck..and your sincere tears recognized our love and I am here my love..never again shall we be apart.
Shashi hugs Surya and cries..
Sumi walks in the room..
Sumi: Can anyone tell me what is going on?
Ram: Shashi will tell you and BTW meet Suryaveera.
Ram winks at Surya and tells Anitha....
Ram: Anitha..lets go home..I am tired....Surya and Shashi have a lot of catching up to do.
Sumi: Now what is going on?? Can anyone tell me.
Ram and Anitha start laughing and leave the room and go to their car.
Anitha: Ram I am sorry...I realized myself what true selflessness is from Genie..I mean Surya.
Ram:Surya has taught us about love and selflessness..I promise you I will pay you all the attention in the world but I wont stop flirting!
Anitha:What??
Ram:Flirting only with you..my sweet doll.
Anitha laughs..
Anitha:But what about Anand??
Ram :Aiyoo..Anand! Anand! Anand!..hey what about Sumi?? We can match them both!
Now Shashi has Surya..so Sumi can get married isnt it?
Anitha: Yes Yes..good idea..let me call Anand now.
Ram: Later Anitha..let me stop at the gift shop first.
Anitha: Why??
Ram: My dear..I want to buy a small photo frame to keep our marriage photograph on my office desk.
Just wait for a while dear..I will make a quick dash in the shop to buy one.
Anitha: Ok..take your time.
Ram goes into the gift shop..he sees a cute silver photo frame and takes it from the display shelf.
As he was taking it..his elbow accidentally hits a small bottle on the next shelf.
The small bottle fell down and the cork of the bottle came off!
All of a sudden the room gets filled with a fragrant blue smoke and Ram could hear a Booming voice singing>>
Then right in front of Ram's eyes..a form takes shape..
Ram :OMG! A Punjabi Genie!
Ram thinks...(I don't want to know his love story..as it is he is already singing about love..I am out of here)
Ram dashes out of the gift shop..The Punjabi Genie runs after him.
Punjabi Genie: Oyeeeeeeeeeee Ram Bhaiya....Kahaan Jaa Rahe Ho..Wait for me Yaar...
Akele Akele Kahaan Jaa Rahe Ho
Hamen Saath Le Lo Jahaan Jaa Rahe Ho...
____________________________ THE END ______________________
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Since Auh Sir expressed his inability to select the best entry as he is otherwise very busy, i am to do the job of selecting the best Entry.
Both entries deserve to be the winner , but i can not declare both of them as winner!!
Renukaji, took more time, wrote very lengthy story, at the same time maintained the Fun Portion in the Story.
Balasubramani Sir did well to end the story short and sweet; he also did very well.
Balasubramani Sir, you deserve special appreciation for taking part in this, i sincerely appreciate you
I wish to give a chance to renukaji to sit in as a Judge , i declare her story as WINNER.
However She has to wait to become a Judge until i announce her as a Judge in another Thread!!
Congratulations Renukaji, you are the winner!!!
Both entries deserve to be the winner , but i can not declare both of them as winner!!
Renukaji, took more time, wrote very lengthy story, at the same time maintained the Fun Portion in the Story.
Balasubramani Sir did well to end the story short and sweet; he also did very well.
Balasubramani Sir, you deserve special appreciation for taking part in this, i sincerely appreciate you
I wish to give a chance to renukaji to sit in as a Judge , i declare her story as WINNER.
However She has to wait to become a Judge until i announce her as a Judge in another Thread!!
Congratulations Renukaji, you are the winner!!!
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