I have not read your poems. I must do that sometime. Using well understood common words from other languages in poetry is a well known technique used by many including Late Vaali. Only required discipline is that it should not sound contrived. It should naturally go with the flow of the syntax and the language of the poetry without attracting attention to its 'distinctness'. If it does, it will be an avoidable distraction. Thank you.
dear sir,
You are right!
Anything forced... including LOVE... is painful! :fear:
Help yourself to my poems when you have some free time.
You will find them listed here!
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